The Iron Box - Epilogue
This ep was on the Western Chanel this morning and I was thinking about what I felt was missing from the end. Slight hanky warning maybe THE IRON BOX-EPILOGUE 'N-I-I-I-C-C-K-K-....." The agonizing cry...
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Deirdre, a wonderful way of filling in the missing part. There had to be serious ramifications to what happened to Heath and you wrote an emotionally charged package to deal with it. &
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Well done! I loved the conversation between Nick and Jarrod, the chocolate cake at the end, and Nick's conversation with "his father" on the starry night. This was particularly good: "Yeah," the moved...
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Ooooh! One of my favorite episodes for extend ons or to do re-do's on This one was very good. You were soooo decriptive and wrote the brothers' emotion perfectly. Thanks for sharing.
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The Iron Box leaves so much unfinished and this story pulls the loose pieces together in an emotionally satisfying read. Poor Nick is truly anguished. This is so true of how you feel when your...
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To bad you didn't write the ending of the episode. Far and away better than the original ending. Wonderfully done. I loved the brothers interactions.
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Your descriptive writing brought these pain-filled scenes alive for me. I loved your rounding off of this episode. The conversation between Nick and Jarrod was superb and I also adored the brotherly...
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This was quite good, on all counts. You can't help but feel for Nick and for Jarrod as well as the possibility of a world without Heath lingers. I never thought I'd be rooting for the THUDLY one, to...
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Deidre, That end always seemed to lame to so many of us, thanks for correcting it. This tale provided great insight into Jarrod's relationship with Heath, as well as seeing the truth of the damage...
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Your Nick and Heath are so gritty and believable as cowboys. Nick's indelicate scratching, Heath's pregnant buffalo crack, and a dozen other memorable phrases and images make your style unique and...
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Sooo good! The Iron Box is one of my favourite episodes, and I like reading ficions about it. Your story is moving, funny and very well done. Thanks!
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Great ending. The original writers could have used your help. I particularly liked I never knew...until tonight...what my soul felt like." Great job
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Thanks for writing this continuation of the story; it adds a lot to it.
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The Iron Box is my favorite brother episode even if it does feature one of the most cartoonish villians and most of the minions from the old Batman series. Your attention to medical details is a far...
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Hey great! Wonderful new ending to my favorite episode! YAY!
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I wish the writers for the original show could have had this kind of sensitivity. Great ending to my favorite episode
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Thanks so much Elvisandlee and PineapleAngel for taking time to read this old ficlet. I think maybe being dissatisfied with the endings of this (and the Night of the Wolf ep, prompting me towrite...
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Oh my...that was amazing! Every emotion....so raw! "In here...the place that got ripped open when you left...he filled it, without even tryin'." WOW!!! I can just see Peter delivering that line! An...
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